
I am deeply overjoyed to share this poem, the first to be published today on MasticadoresUsa. I offer my utmost gratitude to Editor and #1 Amazon Bestseller Author Gabriela Marie Milton for finding my poem worthy of their platform.
The Earth
of my Being
as if is splitting
into parts
yet again
Dry lands
of my emotions
as if fueling
Fires
of my thoughts
Wildfires spreading
no tears raining
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Please go here to read the complete poem. It is an honor and a privilege that you would take the time!
Thank You. Thank You. Thank You :)))
Itโs a gorgeous poem. It was a pleasure to publish it.
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Truly grateful for this kindness and all that you do _()_
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My pleasure ๐ธ๐น
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I love the energy of your poem. The cracks where the energy moves through your poetry thawingโฆ this life of fire Agni here and Earth is whole and how the hell is it? Love this!
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I loved reading your experience of my poem :)) Truly happy to know you felt the energy of it. It had come in the middle of one of those nights where the peace of wholeness refused to come to my being. Thank you so much dear friend, your reading and reflection is a joyful treasure for me!
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Congratulations Pragalbha .. thoughtful words, .. the fires of our world definitelty need a cleansing rain
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Thank you so much Ivor, wishes coming from you mean a lot to me ๐ Yes true, just as a good cry is needed to calm the fiery fast moving thoughts.
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My pleasure ..
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Congratulations!
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Thank you so much :))
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So touching. Thank you PD ๐
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I am so happy to have your kind visit Val, thank you very much! ๐
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Congratulations sis!
You definitely deserve this.
I love the power of your words, and the picture is beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your kind appreciation, truly means a lot to me. I am glad you liked the picture, it is deeply beautiful to me too.
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I read the entire poem. It is soul stirring. The last part
Where the hell
is she
who knows
how to
go beyond
this mind
This is wonderful
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I am overjoyed with deep gratitude that you repeat those lines – thank you for shining your wisdom, for you truly get it what the poem is saying, the last lines are so important to me. Thank you for your kind attention and appreciation.
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Really wonderful! Congratulations!
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Thank you so much, means a lot to me!
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I LOVED this piece Pragalbhadoshi!
Congratulations!
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I was so thrilled to hear you teach yoga in San Jose.
My daughter lives in S.J. and is a certified yoga teacher as well as myself.
I’m also in the Bay Area!
Would be great to connect!
Where do you teach? You can also check in on my website uniquelyfit.net
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Thank you so much for your wishes and appreciation, very kind of you read it!
Oh so precious to know that we are so close! I would love to connect with you, it would be an honor. Thank you for sharing your website, I am very pleased to know of your work and services. My website is http://www.YogaSaar.com. Perhaps we could connect on email first to share more details.
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You’re so very welcome! It was a gift.
Yes, and I soooo agree! this is so awesome and as you know it’s not always easy to get the stars to line up but in this case I will welcome it and look forward to it!!! I’l check it out.
๐ Take good care until then! ๐๐
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My deepest and most heartfelt congratulations to you, Pragalbha. The poem is exquisite. The pain, beauty, and Love youโve expressed in this poem resonates in all of my beingness. Always such an honor to read you and be here. ๐๐
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Your wishes are very important to recieve Jeff, I was moved to explore the Masticasdores submission because of you. I feel so overjoyed to see you listed in there as monthly contributors – you are a positive inspiration for my poetry that seems to go on long breaks after the unrelenting surges in the past that I had gotten used to. It is a heartfelt joy and gratitude that you read this poem and found it exquisite. It was a deep experience to allow it to come to surface. Thank You.
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Many congratulations Pragalbha…I left my comment on MasticadoresUSA’s site…a soulful poem
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You are very kind, thank you for your thoughtful appreciation and wishes, means a lot to me!
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You’re welcome Pragalbha…I’m grateful to read your beautiful writings…
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Congratulations Pragalbha, such a heartfelt and powerful poem! ๐โ
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Thank you so much, your apprecaition means a lot to me!
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You’re very welcome!
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How wonderful, congratulation. A great poem!
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Thank yo very much! Very kind of you to read ๐
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Splendid poem! Congratulations!
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Thank you so much for your kind wishes and appreciation!
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Welcome!
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Congratulations and beautifully done. The way you intertwined our planet and personal life is thought provoking.
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Thank you very much Frank for your kind wishes and appreciation. It means a lot to me that you see how this poem came together and found it meaningful.
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You write so well, Pragalbha. Congratulations.
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I am humbled happy you think so Rupali. Thank you very much for your kind wishes!
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The imagery is so vivid with this one, Pragalbha โค
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I am happy to know you think so ๐ Thank you very much for your thoughtful reading!
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Congratulations! I’m awed by your poetry power!
This:
“Where the hell
is she
who knows
how to
go beyond
this mind”
This poem speaks to the memories I have of the pain and turmoil I experienced. Encapsulates it so perfectly!
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Thank you so much, your kind words and wishes mean a lot to me!
I am so thrilled to get to read those lines back from you, they are the most important lines for me to bring home the experience that this surge of a poem was. It is such deep joy that you read exactly in to the turmoil of the moments that we seek some relief from. Much Gratirude for you Tamara _()_
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โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ I feel blessed! I wasnโt sure where the poem was heading, it felt triggering, because I just re-experienced some old issues in a conversation with my brother, but when I reached the last part my heart and mind rejoiced! Yes! This is where I need to be! ๐ฅฐ๐๐ธ๐ธ
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I am honored, thank you for sharing with me the timing and the experience of the poem, it means a lot to me. The poem had emerged from a resonating space. I am glad that the conclusion gives way to rejoice. It is so helpful if we are still able to remember in times of trigger, that all the chaos is in the mind and there is more available beyond that.
I appreciate engaging with you on this.
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๐๐ we all need to be able to release the stresses and to have reminders of how to get back to ourselves and our happy places! ๐ธ๐ธ
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I like the bit of edginess in the poem. It gives a sense that the speaker is someone who’s strong enough to pull through all the chaos around her. Congrats on its publication!
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I loved knowing how the poem felt to you, thank you very much for sharing that. You give such powerful words for the speaker, I appreciate receiving that description. It is very encouraging for me. Thank you for your kind wishes Hetty, means a lot to me.
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YW ๐
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Really nice!
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Thank you very much for your kind visit!
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Congratulations on the publication dear Pragalbha. Your deep understanding of life is commendable!
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Thank you very much Radhika, I appreciate your kind support always. That is very kind of you to say _()_
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Marvelous and beautifully words so well composed, Pragalbha. You have always written all your poems with depth and deep understanding of the subject. Too good.
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That is very kind of you to say, truly appreciate your words of appreciation. It makes me happy to be acknowledged for depth, thank you very much for reading with such thought and attention _()_
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You are always welcome dear and keep on writing and inspiring us always. Take care and stay safe โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
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Congratulations. I really loved the depth and imagery of your poem.
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Thank you very much Abhiskek, it is my joy that you see the depth in the poem. Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation.
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My pleasure!
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Congratulations on having your voice shared. Your words are heartfelt.
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Thank you very mcuh Ali, your kind appreciation means a lot to me! _()_
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What an amazing piece and utter brilliance, gently touching the inner emotions and done in an effortless manner in touching the chords and stroking the senses
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Thank you so much for your kind words Vishal. Such poetry, when it comes, it does not feel like any of my doing. I feel gratitude for it choosing me to flow through _()_
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worthy poem and stunning shot!
hope to catch up eventually but no promises ๐
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Thank you so much, truly appreciate it!
You keep doing what you are doing my friend, it is a gift to us all ๐
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grateful you see it that way ๐
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Loved the poem – the use of earth as a metaphor for your own being. How closely we are related – if only we understood and took care of ourselves and the earth.
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Smiles :))) to you, it makes me happy that you can see the association that I felt so viscerally. We do need more care – both for ourselves and our planet. Thank you very much Smitha for your thoughtful comment.
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Heartfelt and powerful.
This is my favorite part:
“Minefield of my mind
struggles
to hold together
all lands of me”
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What a joy to see your visit my friend and to read these lines back from you. It makes me very happy and grateful to know they are your favorite. Thank you very much Magarisa, you made my day ๐
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You’re most welcome, Pragalbha.
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Congratulations
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Thank you so much truly _()_
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With its gorgeous imagery, this poem is indeed worthy of the eyes! I absolutely love the feeling of moisture and growth. ๐
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Your kind appreciation means a lot to me Jaya ๐ Your response brings loving warmth and encouragement to me. Thank you very much for taking the time.
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