Time and again
Find myself in insistence
Of proving my existence
Through experiences and relations
Often Β running wild with emotions
This unrelenting persistence
To find soothing sustenance
Said the great poet
‘Close your eyes, fall in love‘
Try that with my mind quiet
With each heartbeat, seeds I sow
‘I am’ ‘I am’ I am’
Simply Being at best
Is a forever quest
Beautiful. Inspiring .. I am a peaceful soul. I am consistently peaceful..time and time again then calmness reign over me
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Thank you very much for your affirmations and appreciation. Peace is what my intention of the poem was.
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Wonderful π
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Thank you so much for visiting π
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Beautiful. That is Rumi in your poem. Love it!
My spiritual retreat was a lot about coming home to the loving of our hearts. At least for me. Really touching.
“I am” β€
Love,
Debbie
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Oh yes it is Rumi π and no doubt there that you would get it! π I am so happy to know about your retreat …those experiences are so powerful and soothing at the same time! Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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That’s so true. Though, staying at the best seems hardest job, and reaching there is even more.
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Yes, a forever quest π Thank you very much for your comment.
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WoW!!! this is amazing……….practically the every minute of my life……..be the best…..prove existence……not to others but for self……..and to do that…..you must love your being……..the best in every moment…….loved it!! π π
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Thank you so much for reflecting back with all the thought behind it …really appreciate it! π
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always a pleasure……. π π
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So Nice.
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Thank you!
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Welcome.
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these two stanzas seem so very separate for me.
“oh, you’d better write fast, poet!
you’ll die at the end, and all that will be left
will be the word.”
Love the heartbeat=iam iam iam
so right, so true. a constant gentle reminder so often ignored.
A forever quest it is, and yet, we are already achieving it.
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Thank you very much for your time and feedback.
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you inspired this:
https://erbiage.wordpress.com/2016/12/22/heartbeat/
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Thank you very much for the honoring acknowledgment!
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Why does this have to be the ONLY reblaile source? Oh well, gj!
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Could you please elaborate on what your question is?
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Good to see a talent at work. I can’t match that.
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Thank you!
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Beautifully written!!
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I really appreciate your time on my writings, Thank you! π
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π:)
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Hahaha Pragalbha ,
How are you ?…you have expressed your state of mind beautifully.
Opposite will exist ….you can’t ignore it. I am and being limited..will persist with nothingness and infinite…
Hope you are doing good…
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π thank you for bringing lightheartedness with your laugh. Yes you bring beautiful contrasts …I love the words nothingness and infinite as my favorites …
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