
The process keeps going life beside
you yearn for a bit longer respite
A sense of having found a ground
maybe for a day and yet again slip down
Another layer being called to shed more,
then called to show up and Be more
Allowing lower energy mind games to penetrate
to become like others around to be able to relate
Showing how attached still to comforts of certainty
then suffering for not being your own self worthily
Feel and sense the divide happening
Grief of as if current reality leaving
Comes with having to keep going
while still staying in your Being
Cusp of opening up from the guardedness
feel the transition and rawness
The waves keep coming yes
you hope you can let go…
Maybe this is how it looks like always
you simply learn to breathe better in calmness
PS : This poem was composed sometime last year from my response to one of Sue Dreamwalker’s post on her profoundly inspirational blog Dreamwalker’s Sanctuary. I realized I had never published it.
“Cusp of opening up from the guardedness
feel the transition and rawness” -I absolutely love this line! This whole piece is truly stunning, thank you so much for sharing!! The depth, authenticity, vulnerability, love and strength in this piece is truly palpable. And there is such a divine flow that is soothing to the soul to read. Beautifully done, my dear friend 🖤🤗
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I am overjoyed at the line you picked to repeat :)) It perhaps would be my favorite line too. Thank you very much for your positive, knowing and enthused appreciation. It truly means a lot to me to know that you enjoyed the flow while reading. Much Love.
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Sometimes we put pieces away
because our emotion altered next day
but the thoughts are there to stay
and arise again to be an honest display
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Ah that is the most precious lovely response dear Ivor!! So grateful fo this :))) Thank you!! It is indeed an honest display of past emotion 🙂
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My pleasure … and I have save it in my notebook .. maybe one my words might re-emerge..
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I like the description: “lower energy mind games” Good reminder: “The waves keep coming yes”.
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Ah yes thank you Frank for sharing the lines you liked – those mind games are sneaky.
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I really like this, Pragal, especially the ending lines.
“The waves keep coming yes
you hope you can let go…
Maybe this is how it looks like always
you simply learn to breathe better in calmness”
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It is a precious joy for me to know you like those lines dear kind friend trE 🙏🏼💛 thank you very much :))
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You’re most welcome, my pleasure.
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I like this too thatvwe learn to breathe in calmness. I think this is an important life lesson. Or a tool even.
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Wonderful😊
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Thank you so much 🙏🏼💛
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I really liked these lines:
“Another layer being called to shed more,
then called to show up and Be more”
and
“Showing how attached still to comforts of certainty
then suffering for not being your own self worthily”
It makes me think about how we have to go through some pain to give birth to who we are.
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how we have to go through some pain to give birth to who we are – I loved how you said this, it feels exactly that. Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness of sharing the lines you like and wonderful reflection on it 🙏🏼💛
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I liked the same lines.
Another layer being called to shed more,
then called to show up and Be more
.. because that so true in life. We shed, we figure out our life a little. We need more time. But then we have get back to showing up.
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I am so glad that you published this poem, dear Pragalbha. Your words are profound, as always, as you reflect upon the continual process of becoming…I love all of your lines, and the last two in the first stanza came straight into my heart.
“Another layer being called to shed more,
then called to show up and Be more.” That is just so, exactly. I feel this deeply. A beautiful, beautiful poem, my dear friend. ❤🤗🙏
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Kind friend Jeff, you read so truly into the lines and affirm this process with your knowing of it – it is very fulfilling and gratifying for me when you write back with how my poem spoke to you. Your appreciation is of great support to me, thank you 🙏🏼💛
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You’re most welcome, dear Pragalbha. I am glad to know that my reading of your work is gratifying and satisfying to you. Your poems and words always speak to me. I feel the same way about how you read my work. I think we can see right through each other’s words to the experience that lay behind because we know. I love this process. Is beautiful. Have a lovely day, my dear friend. ❤🙏
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Indeed Jeff, the resonance is a beautiful gift :))
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Ah this is a great philosophical take using the theme of waves! Good one PD 🙂
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Thank you very much, I am happy that you enjoyed it!
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My pleasure 🤗
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“Maybe this is how it looks like always
you simply learn to breathe better in calmness”…ahhh this is solitude in words…i love how you calm me with this piece…this soothes my heart…😊😊😊
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That makes me and my heart smile deep :))) Thank you very much for such kind appreciation Michele.
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As always wonderful..
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Thank you very much, I am happy to have you visit and read!
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A practice for life. Beautiful post 🙏🏻💚
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It does resonate!
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“Cusp of opening up from the guardedness
feel the transition and rawness
The waves keep coming yes
you hope you can let go…
Maybe this is how it looks like always
you simply learn to breathe better in calmness”
I can so relate to this Prgalbha. Many times I feel you are mirroring my contemplative feelings. Only, you put it to words so beautifully my friend.
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I feel humbed and happy to read your comment dear Radhika! It is so fulfilling to know that you relate to the poem and that your contemplation is mirrored. Poetry is such wave that brings richness to us in varied ways. I truly love your poetry and am thrilled that you enjoyed mine 🙂 Thank you!
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Woww..! It’s so fantastic dear..! I loved it very much..! So awesome..!
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That makes me very happy to know that you enjoyed this my friend. Thank you very much for kindly stopping by and taking the time to read and comment.
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You’re very welcome dear..! It’s my pleasure..!
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Life’s waves are so beautifully penned and I completely agree with you. The waves at times rise up and at times goes down and life takes on a different meaning. It is all depending on us how we take life’s waves in our hands. Lovely poem.
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It is such a positive joy always to have you visit and read :)) Thank you very much for your kind appreciation and wonderful reflection.
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You are always welcome dear. Lovely poem so positive. 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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I liked the same lines.
Another layer being called to shed more,
then called to show up and Be more
.. because that so true in life. We shed, we figure out our life a little. We need more time. But then we have get back to showing up.
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I love and appreciate your comment – yes we do figure out a little at a time and also have to show up continually!
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😉😊
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Always beautiful
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Thank you so much, it gives me such joy to see your visit :)))
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I like this too thatvwe learn to breathe in calmness. I think this is an important life lesson. Or a tool even.
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In the UK we are going to fully open our lockdown on ghec19th July. And omg it is scarey.
These lines you wrote match my feeling right now. I know they aren’t intended for this. But it proves how evergreen and versatile this poem you have written is.
Cusp of opening up from the guardedness
feel the transition and rawness
The waves keep coming yes
you hope you can let go…
Maybe this is how it looks like always
you simply learn to breathe better in calmness
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Ah it feels absolutely gratifying that you find this poem relevant to you in current circumstances for where you are – it opens up my awareness from this being an internal process to how universal it can be. And I totally relate to the overwhelm over things opening up as if so suddenly from such intense times of staying in and distanced. Thank you so much for taking the time to visit and share your thoughts, it truly means a lot to me :))
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My pleasure always
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Prolific and profound. A capture of the struggle, to be or not to be and only in being authentic can our spirit live with the outcome. Well written. Loved it!
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only in being authentic can our spirit live with the outcome – these wise knowing words from you are such a beautiful reflection!! Thank you my friend for your kind visit and appreciation!!
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I only mirrored your thought, which is lovely and can be challenging. You are most welcome my friend.
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:)) _()_
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So beautifully penned Pragalbha…I especially loved the last paragraph…not sure if you wrote it keeping the pandemic in mind or not but it seems really apt for all of us at this current time…💗💗
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Thank you very much dear friend. Your kind appreciation is such a joy to me. Another comment made me aware how the last paragraph is relevant to the pandemic, and I am so happy you think so too. It is so beautiful to find our own ways to relate to the poem! I was personally more coming from my tendency to be guarded in my ways of being called to show up more authentically, which is often times vulnerable and not comfortable.
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Isn’t it so fantastic that you wrote it from one perspective but your readers can totally relate to it thinking of a different perspective…that’s the beauty of your words surely 😀💞
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It truly made me humbled and happy :))
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Deeply beautiful and profound.
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Pragalbha, you have a gift for knowing and describing what lies beneath life’s surface. ✨
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Your kind beautiful words gave me a smile, truly appreciate, thank you very much Michele :))
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🌞💐
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This felt very much like the ‘ebb and flow’ of life Infinite. And I really enjoyed the style of this piece.
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Beautiful poem showing the layers of life. And life goes on.
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment Rupali! Life does go on.
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Aah…. you describe so beautifully a life process which can often be quite exhausting and overwhelming, but often has to be gone through to find oneself, and one’s own ground. Thank you!
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Thank you my friend, your visit makes me happy. Your comment describes perfectly where my poem came from.
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Always a pleasure, and an experience. 🙂
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:)))🙏🏼
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So so beautifully written! You have got such wonderful expression! Loved your blog😀
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind visit on my blog space and I hope you continue to stay in touch. I look forward to getting to visit and know your work.
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Yes, I followed you, made a new friend on WordPress!
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🙏🏼💛
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A beautiful piece! Lots to take from this one. Stay blessed and well❤️❤️🙏🤗
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I am so glad and grateful you think so! Thank you very much for your kind words and we’ll wishes 🙏🏼💛
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Such a beautiful and touching post. Thank you PD 💕🙏💕
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Thank you very much for your kind visit and appreciation dear Val 🙏🏼💛
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you really share it all straight from your heart … this describes so well those yo yo moments! And look at all the discussion it’s raised, well done!
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It was raw and real when the words came. Thank you for seeing that. Your visit makes me very happy, thank you very much kind friend 🙏🏼💛
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always welcome Pragalbha … your posts resonate!
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🙏🏼💛
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Another profound, enlightening piece! No matter how many times we feel we may have “arrived”, we keep moving through the many layers of life.
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Your joyful loving and supportive response means a lot to me 💛 So perfect what you say, we keep arriving continually indeed. Thank you so much Margarisa!
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You’re most welcome, my friend!
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It’s beautifully written, and I love your usage of the word ‘waves’.
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Thank you dear friend for your kind words, also happy to know that you loved the word Waves – that’s how all of life feels currently 🙂
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You’re welcome, and you’re quite right!
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Lovely deep and beautiful 😍
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I cannot believe I missed this. Huh. Just in observation from my own life, these waves are coming faster and faster now, and leave us at times spinning over and over again. It’s tantamount to find solid ground as quickly as we can and stay there. Loved this poem, Prag, and boy does it apply to my life!!! Keep shining and being the example of light that you are. Much love to you! xo
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I nodded in agreement with you – the waves are coming faster and faster. I do feel that I get shaken and for a bit look around frantically for a solid ground – to discover after some agony that I am in fact already standing on a new ground. Again and again. Much Gratitude and Love to you always for affirming and supporting the process.
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If you know how to sing, that helps. I’ve been doing so of late in my “light language” and it immensely helps with the anxiety. I woke this morning knowing it would be a challenge day for me, and it has. Remembering to breathe and then to sing helps!! Yes you are definitely standing on new ground. Now we both have to figure out exactly where are we. (smile) Much love to you! xo
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Big Hugs to you :)))))
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Beautifully written and thoughtful piece, Pragalba. ❤ The "comfort of certainty" seems to me to be one of the worst enemies of personal growth. It takes courage to put yourself out there and be brave enough to challenge long-held beliefs as situations evolve. 🙂 Have a great week!
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Bless your dear Heart Pragalbha.. Thank you for the mention dear friend..
“Feel and sense the divide happening
Grief of as if current reality leaving
Comes with having to keep going
while still staying in your Being”
Spoke volumes to me dear friend… ❤ … beautiful poetry … I feel as if I am at the moment at the mercy of the Waves of emotion … But as I gain my strength this too shall pass…
Sending love and well wishes dearest friend ❤
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Reading those lines back from you is a fresh fuel of energy ✨ Wishing you all the ease and power through the waves – they are undeniable in current times, and yes this too shall pass. Loads of Love and Gratitude kind blessed friend 🙏🏼💛💝✨so honored and happy to have your visit.
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Do grateful to have your friendship and understanding 🙏💖💕💖
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