There is a way of life you flow through
There comes a force that just cuts through
Breaks you apart from what you live through
Wipes you out with that, what you grow through
The surge comes with no warning through
Momentum of what Is, replaced with what gashes through
Seems like all is stopped and slowed through
There is all of that, what is then struggled through
Then there comes surrender to faith through
Nuggets of precious insights, joyful moments trickle through
There is a space of wonderment created through
Between where you got pushed from & where you are being led through
Rest in that curious space, don’t rush through …
This post is a contribution to ForgivingFridays of ForgivingConnects of dear blogger/Kindness teacher Debbie.
Yes, don’t rush through. This is inspiring, and beautiful :):)
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π π Thank you so much, your comment made me smile and happy.
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:):) that is a blessing to make you smile :):)
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Much gratitude for these beautiful words π
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Such an inspiring poem depicting journey of all of us. Yes everything we once believed changes and we grow through this process! Wonderfully and rhythmically presented !!
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It is all of our journeys alike indeed. Your reflection feels perfect and makes me happy π Thank you very much dear Meenakshi.
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Oh the tug of war of life π₯ great poem as always
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Life tugs deep indeed, my friend. Thank you so much for your heartfelt response.
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You made a very good description of these curious ways and spaces in life. In fact I never realized changes in my life, not even in puberty, but now I feel them.
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Thank you Anie, I am glad you recognize these spaces. I agree, sometimes we find them looking back on the major transitions that we have been through.
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As usual, very well conveyed, the process and lessons of life, the journey, the learnings, the curious space, all wonderfully penned. π
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I am always so happy to have your thoughtful words, thank you Deepika π
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Totally, my pleasure βΊοΈ
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Everything happens at its own pace. Beautifully penned!
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That is a perfectly stated essence of this poem. Thank you very much π
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Very well written! It’s so inspiring π
I’m so glad I followed you, I now have a lil bit of your wisdom to sail through ππ
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Thank you so much dear friend. I am very happy to be connected to your blog too π
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Always feel happy to read your writings.
They make my day.π
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π That makes me very happy to know. Thank you very much my friend.
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β€ β€ β€ I love the flowyness of the words.
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Thank you for your lovely and kind words π
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Everything has its own pace and we must leave it at that. I am left in awe as to how you manage to bring a new and fresh piece of wisdom wrapped in the magic of poetry that I go back to read and re-read those lines, simply to get more and more meaning out of them.
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Your first statement is perfect reflection and a solid affirmation to me! Your kind and beautiful words that follow are really precious to me. I feel happy and content about being a contribution that way, thank you very much!
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Your most welcome, Pragalbha
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I read through
Being pushed and pulled through
By your words that meandered through
π
What a way to get through.
Beautiful Infinite, that was a wonderful through-way. β€
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Your poetic response made it all the more beautiful for me π Thank you so much for the loveliness and the love.
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You are so welcome Infinite π
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Nuggets of precious insights, joyful moments trickle through
There is a space of wonderment created through
Between where you got pushed from & where you are being led through
all of this and more, yes, yes β€ thank you Pragal for your never ending wisdom β€
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Always such happiness to read back lines extracted that spoke to you π Thank you so much my friend for your continued support and love.
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The surge comes with no warning through
Momentum of what Is, replaced with what gashes through
Gashes replaced with momentum, love it!! Missed you Pragalbha, hope you’ve been doing well!!
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You sure made my day with your kind thoughtful visit and words on multiple of my posts π Thank you very much truly!
I have been hoping to find your work through the feed, and surely missed seeing any. I am glad to sense that all is well for you. Likewise I have been well too.
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Of course!! I missed your work! Things actually got pretty stagnant for a while just waiting to get back to Thailand and feeling like my life was currently unfulfilling at the time, but it was ok because it was in order to save so I could spend time abroad again hopefully for the majority of the year. Kinda funny we just talked about how difficult surrender is, and this is a situation where I failed at doing so gracefully. Ended up disconnecting from presence and having to deal with a lot of stuff from the past again. Always a hard time to get back out of the forest if you venture too far. Glad to hear things have been going well for you though π
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I so appreciate you sharing this! I very well relate to what you are saying. When things from past show up, the only choice is to remain present with that …I remember riding similar waves recently. As we keep going on this path I understand how difficult it can get to feel graceful π We need to be kind to ourselves when we are finding our way out of the forest. Wish you a whole lot of joy and ease ahead!
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Self-compassion is the only way out of the forest! And thank you π
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I loved the last line.
The Curious though Mysterious space we occupy through.
A Wonderful journey that it allows through.
Shiva
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And I loved yours – A Wonderful journey that it allows through – Thank you so much for your kind reflection.
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In jinx it was a beautiful essence of life journey. We all go through same.. it’s just different mindset which ride on different momentum’s resulting in different outcomes.
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Absolutely right! This is indeed everyone’s experience. Thank you very much for your kind reflection.
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beautiful message, loved your words!
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I value your kind appreciation, thank you!
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Very nicely written.
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Thank you very much.
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I love this! So inspiring!
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Thank you very much for your kind comment and visit.
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You’re very welcome!!
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This poem dear Pragalbha is a pure nugget of enlightenment.. So enjoyed each and every line.. β€
Its true, that which breaks us, creates us.. forcing us onto a different path, to go with the flow..
A beautiful poem.. π
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You confer such high praise on me, I bow with hands to heart. I loved having your statement – that which breaks us creates us …Thank you very much truly!!
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Indeed, such a true statement Pragalbha.. Much love and gratitude for your own kind comments and visits my friend π
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I had to read your words several times and just allowed Silence to incorporate them within. Your ability to describe Life Passages are incredible and every time I read something your have written I just sit in Silence as my Heart embraces your Message. Powerfully moving! Thank you so much for sharing your Talent with us, Pragalbha. You are so appreciated by me! Bless you! πΉ
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I have utmost gratitude for having you spend time on my work. My heart too soaks in the experience of your words always. Ease, love and joy _()_
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“through”
It’s spontaneous, unpredictable, wavey… reminds me not to get stuck. π
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I loved having this unique response of yours! You made that word freshly relevant to me. Thank you my friend for your thoughtful visit.
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Now I may be behind on visits but surely do like the company π
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π That is very sweet of you.
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Don’t rush through… it’s something I keep needing reminders of. it’s like all my life I have been rushing through and even though I lerned how important it is not to…yet habbit takes over when in the auto pilot mode. Thank you for this lovely reminder. π
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I am glad you see this as relevant and useful. It is easier said than done lot of times for me too …I think I am getting better at it though. Habit is a strong force. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts.
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This is awesome… An inspirational read… Liked it a lot… π
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Your kind words make me happy and content. Thank you very much.
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It is always a pleasure to read your work… waiting for more… π
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Thank you for the kindness and happiness!
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Pragalbha, I am so honored and touched. This is an immense poem of wisdom, of surrender, of opening to the good, and of self-honoring. The last line, “Rest in that curious space, donβt rush through ⦔ made me cry, it is so kind and caring.
I am honored to share your poem this week for Forgiving Fridays. Thank you, thank you. β€
Blessings,
Debbie
ps – One of the things I love is how you build to a crescendo (of letting go) with this poem and then it relaxes into this well of rest and peace. That's what it did for me! A blessing of making peace with myself.
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I am deeply touched, honored and humbled by your response dear Debbie. Your comment is precious to me in so many different ways. You shared truly how my poem felt to you in your experience. You shared with me how the construct of the poem flows to a peak and then restful peace. You gave such contentment to the writer in me with your thoughtful kind reflection and sharing on it. Immense gratitude and love to you.
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This one is so special Pragalbha. Full of positive wisdom and inspiration, it is so perfect to read and reinforce.
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And you comment feels very special to me dear Radhika! Thank you very much for your kind words.
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