
Photo Credit : Manish Doshi, Editing : Vikram Phale
So close to home
And as if trying to find my way
Just around the corner
And feeling as if lost on the way
Oh so puzzled
Mind all muddled
Oh usually that’s the way
It is, they say
It’s human, regular human
Easy to relate
Better than to create
And to reach home solemn
Relate to everyone around
Than create your path abound
Former may seem easy
Latter a thrill to foresee
So close to home
In there is it very lone?
Just around the corner
Seems fun to linger
There’s plenty of company
And also sometimes misery
Should I just go home
And see how it is to be lone?
All puzzled and muddled
I enter my home
To be cuddled
In my own heart and soul
Wish someone would accompany
There is a threshold though
Beyond which only I can go
It really doesn’t help to have anybody
Take the step, take the plunge and dive
Take your puzzles and the muddles
Rest them there and watch them live
Don’t solve the riddles
Don’t push nor let them cling really
Give them a place
And they will go away actually
Ah! this home is a peaceful space
Back out in the world
And around the corner again
Still trying to find my way
New found faith to help stay
The puzzles and the muddles
Don’t bother now
A light flickers every step of the way
Just follow the instinct I say
So close to home now I know
While always trying to find my way
I do often revisit home
Now that I also love to be lone …
“The puzzles and the muddles
Donβt bother now
A light flickers every step of the way
Just follow the instinct I say”
These lines, they are spectacular and unleashing! π
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Wow those lines with your description as spectacular and unleashing, really made me look at them deeply again. Thank you for the happiness π
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Welcome π
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Sensational outpouring of self-catering discovery πππ
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Thank you so much for your amazing and kind words in feedback π
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Beautiful as always. You really make one think woth ypu poems, always well written and profound. I always look forward to your post cause you challenge me to think. Thank you for a fantastic post..
Life journey a puzzle and muddle. Hime can give a cuddle and sometimes home is the puzzle the muddle. Home is when I am at peace with the Divine all whole and complete, no puzzle or muddle there. But muddle puzzle is how to get there and the courage it takes to get there.. thats life journey..
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You are so kind to give this wonderful reflection. Your description of life journey is so perfect. Thank you very much dear Bella.
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You are welcome
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Have you ever had a thought…it leaves your mind quickly….and you stand there trying to remember your thought? This kind of reminds me of that ‘feeling’.
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That is so beautiful what you describe! Made me go back and read my poem in that light. Thank you very much for your contribution.
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You’re welcome Infinite.
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Powerful! Deeply provocative!
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and kind words.
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I find myself wanting to be alone in solitude more and more lately βfinding my wayβ. π. Is that you in the photo? The photo finish is cool.
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I am so glad to have you in company in finding the way.
Yes, that is me π A friend did this cool editing for me. Thank you so much for your appreciation, he will be happy to know that!
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“Now that I also love to be lone” Felt like coming a long way,
Loved the way you wrote it.
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It is a long way indeed π Thank you for reading into it deeply.
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This is amazingly amazing ππplease read this article https://bleedingthoughtsweb.wordpress.com/2017/10/16/note-to-self/
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Thank you.
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At the doorstep, though, a new door waiting….
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Thank you so much for adding this beautiful thought.
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Beautiful and deep!
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Thank you very much for your kind words!
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You’re utmost welcome π
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Aww…how beautifully you write. As I always say, inspiring.. I enter my home to be cuddled in my own heart and soul. Now I also love to be lone.
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Thank you so much for reading and the big smile on me π
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Home sweet home! It is good to get away, to engage with fellow humans but when you want to be in the company of yourself in your own space, there is nothing like home. π
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Yes, it is a balance much needed between engaging with others and being at home with yourself. Thank you sharing your thoughts π
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Yes, just the right balance. Your most welcome.
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Hope it’s a good week. =)
Xxxx
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It is π Thank you for your visit.
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This describes wonderfully the dilemma, the path to the solution, and the sense of comfort once the solution is tested. I guess we all search for that home at some point in life…only to discover that at the core it can only be your own refuge, to get to know your own self and discover your own truths. Thank you for sharing, I so relate to this journey!
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VS it is so much happiness that you read this! π And that you relate …all your poems give me the same joyful feeling. Your thoughts in response to this poem are so beautiful and perfectly said!
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Thank you, PD! Yes, I could relate to it totally!!!
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π π π Always makes me so happy.
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