Last year I had posted the following from my then 10 year old son: His innocent reflection on his journey of acceptance about being the shortest around, for his age.
This week he said to me “Mom, I have 3 poems that I have written on some of my experiences. Can I have my own blog site to publish them?” I promised him that for now I would publish them on my site. If you have any thoughts on his work, please let him know 🙂
Work!
Do you really have so much work
Or do you just feel you have too much work
Do you have so much work
Or are you fooling around with mirth.
Do you really have so much work
Or are you just going with a quirk
Did you ever have too much work
Or do you just at your desk lurk
Do you wish you didn’t have any work
And just acting like a jerk
Don’t worry about how much
Keep focus and work as much
Don’t bother or struggle as such
Just be done and play as much
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Think good!
When you think about something bad
You might just feel very sad
When you don’t think about something good
You won’t be in a good mood.
If you think that it’s sad
You might get really mad
If you think of something that’s great
You might have a better fate.
When you always think bad
You may not be known as a good lad
If you think that it will be good
It probably surely would.
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Fun time?
When you’re doing something fun
You don’t want to be done
When you’re doing something boring
You would rather be snoring.
When you’re doing something fun
You can’t tell when you should be done
When you’re doing something you don’t enjoy
Your time just doesn’t go by
When you’re doing something you like
It feels like you’re riding a bike
When you don’t feel like doing something
It feels better to go take a hike
_ By Sanved Doshi, 11 yrs.
P.S. Sanved is very happy to make this post a contribution to ForgivingFridays, a wonderful blog by dear Debbie.
All good ones from a budding poet. Thanks for sharing. Give regards to Sanved.
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Thank you, Your acknowledgement is big for him!
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Wow … very enjoyable
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Thank you, made him very happy!
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He deserves to be
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🙂
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Very good. And cute 😉
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Thank you 🙂
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Always full of wisdom and beauty
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Thank you from him!
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Lovely
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Thank you!
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Great start. Let him continue writing . Good luck 👍
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Thank you very much, means a lot to him 🙂
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It is a wonderful read, all of them. Good going, great job 👍
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Thank you very much! Your encouragement means a lot to him 🙂
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Brilliant poems from a budding poet! Keep on writing Sanved
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He has a bright smile on him as he reads your comment, thank you so much!
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Nice! He has a bright poetic future. I also like his positivity=)
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He has a wide smile as he reads this 🙂 Thank you very much!
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Wow he’s at a great start!! Loved the last two.. “Think good!” And “Fun time?”
Tell him he is a legend! ✌😎
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You made his day:) …he is so happy reading your comment! Thank you.
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This is WONDERFUL! I love your son’s poem. Please tell Sanved that I think he’s really talented and to KEEP GOING 🙂
If you like, please feel free to contribute this post for Forgiving Fridays. As a reminder, all you need to do is a pingback to my post from this Friday (https://forgivingconnects.com/2017/04/14/todays-forgiving-fridays-compassion-and-my-mom/ ) and to include #ForgivingFridays in your tags.
Anyway, up to you! I love it! May the blessings enfold you and your son — Debbie
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Your kind comment is a treasure for Sanved. He is so happy reading it. I will happily make this a contribution to ForgivingFridays!
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Oh yay! I am so happy. 🙂 Tell Sanved that I will share his beautiful poetry in my Forgiving Fridays next week. This is great. He’s very talented. You are a good mom. Love and blessings to you both. ~Debbie
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Thank you 🙂 for all the beautiful kindness.
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Happy blessed wonderful Easter. May source shower on you and family unlimited love and countless smiles and happiness and light 🙏🙏
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Thank you very much for your blessings and light for my family! Sorry your comment appeared in my notifications today hence the late response.
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It is okay….. Thank you for the blessings.
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this was inevitable, i think you should make him his own blog. I was 14 when i wrote my first, and i was 16 when i finished my first and only novel. My parents knew about it when i was 18. and that too i had to tell them, because i was given a big ass trophy because of that, which i did not know how to hide. well, if only i had had the support and published, So all i am trying to say is get him his blog ASAP!
cute honest and well rhymed! loved them all! 🙂 🙂
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i went over board…..too intense……didn’t i?…………i am so sorry.
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Without knowing when-why-how-what are you talking about, I will safely say Noo …that is not possible 🙂
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i guess…….you assumed correct…… 😛
thank you!!! 🙂 🙂
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🙂
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You are a very kind and special soul to share that with me. Gave me a huge nudge in parental perspective. Truly truly thank you!!! As a parent I am a bit guarded in my mind about the open virtual world and its ways, to give access to my boy. You are helping me be more confident as I help him make choices and support him. Stay blessed!
And also thank you for seeing his honesty and innocence.
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i am so glad this was of some positive value…….and he is doing great! 🙂 🙂
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Wow. Brilliant. Like mother like son 😉😎 Please let Sanved know that I loved these. Lots of love to him 🌷
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You are very kind 🙂 He will be thrilled to know his poem is visited and appreciated. Thank you!
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🐼💙
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Way to go, buddy. These poems remind me of my poems when I was your age about seven years ago. Your ideas and pictures behind the words can be developed into such beautiful verses. Work on it and never see it as a challenge but as a joy. Pour your heart out. Looking forward to seeing your books on the stands. God bless you.. . .
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You are so kind and generous. You have given Sanved the best in your thoughtful words and blessings. It is a delight and privilege for him to get to read this today after school 🙂 I wish you be showered with blessings galore!
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You’re welcome.😊 I am in my last year at school and had just started blogging. Believe me when I say encouragement means a lot to people. Kids today are missing out on the fun the world of poems give. I am happy Sanved has found it.
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Yes you are very right 🙂 And I repeat you are a very kind and generous. I wish you the true joys of your dreams.
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Thanks!!!
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