As I sit in my patio now, looking through the rain …
Rain pouring, pouring love
Earth soaking, soaking heart
Winds blowing, blowing directions
Rainlines crossing, crossing thoughts
Waterbaskets weaving, weaving emotions
Branches brushing, brushing chill
Puddles float bubbles, bubbles burst in mind
Winds stand still, stands still mind
Birds picking under tree, tree is bare
Few dry leaves hanging wet, wet desires few soaked in faith
Feel at home, home that is within me
Wide open spacious, spacious yet so full
Look through the rain more, more I get the inward pull
It keeps pouring, pouring love
Each grain of sand soaking, soaking each cell, body and soul …
Love your poems.. like the idea of wet wet in faith.. to be drenched and soaked in faith …how powerful that is
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Thank you very much for your appreciation and reaffirming the idea of the power of faith.
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I love the style of this one. Beautifully fast moving and captivating. π
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Thank you very much your beautiful reflection of how my poem felt to you π
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I love the repetition and the wordplay in each line. This is lovely
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This appreciation from you means a lot to me! Thank you very much π
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You are most welcome. Truly, you are.
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i love rain……you have beautifully drawn parallels of the image and creation………absolutely loved this!!! π π
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Thank yo very much! π
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my pleasure….!!! π π
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Beautiful and unique. Thanks for sharing this PD.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, truly value it.
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You’re welcome PD.
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Drenched in emotions, beautiful, your poetry is so beautiful!
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Thank you very much for this beautiful comment, truly made my day!
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It was my pleasure. You have another follower π
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Thank you π
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this is so beautifully refreshing and profound! Your repetitions echo and soothe, well composed π
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and appreciate π
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thanks for sharing the link, much appreciated!
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